Comments on: Friday Flash Fiction – Half-Man

By: Martin McGrath

Martin McGrath — Sat, 19 Jan 2008 21:33:16 +0000

Hi Dan – welcome to the Friday Flashers (as I still prefer to think of us). It took me a little while to get into this one, but about half way down I clicked with what you were trying to do and suddenly it became a very moving read. Nice.

By: Shaun CG

Shaun CG — Sat, 19 Jan 2008 17:20:40 +0000

Welcome aboard, Greg, and congratulations on a great start. As Neil says, a wistful and nostalgic tale. Pushes all the right buttons.

By: Greg O'Byrne

Greg O'Byrne — Sat, 19 Jan 2008 00:44:47 +0000

Thanks for the feedback guys.

By: GLP

GLP — Fri, 18 Jan 2008 21:34:26 +0000

Hey Greg, welcome aboard. You have a confident writing style and you set this tale up very economically. Nice work.

By: dan

dan — Fri, 18 Jan 2008 20:51:44 +0000

Seconding the welcome here. Good one

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Friday Flash Fiction: The Cloud « The other side of the river — Fri, 18 Jan 2008 20:19:53 +0000

[...] Addendum: This week the Friday Flash Fictioneers are joined by a new comer: Greg O’Byrne with Half-Man. [...]

By: Neil

Neil — Fri, 18 Jan 2008 20:16:25 +0000

Welcome aboard Greg. A strange, wistful tale – I liked it a lot.